Writing styles are affected by various attributes such as genre, time and culture settings, social backgrounds, personalities of the characters, and the mood of a scene. Fiction offers a distilled representation of the ways in which writers are among the most significant touchstones in another’s life. However, as much as a writer may have the zest and passion to write, there is always that time in the day when she or he asks “is this story any good?”
Today’s post is dedicated to those writers that could use a bit of push in the right direction. The rubric below may help you get back your confidence. Getting opinions are helpful, but self-guided direction may be the first step to improving your story.
Directions: Reread your story. What do you need to do to make it better? Use this rubric to help you decide. Check the sentences that describe your story.
The beginning makes my audience want to read more. It introduces the characters, the setting, and the problem.
The middle shows how the characters deal with the problem.
All of the events are in order and are important to the story.
The ending shows how the problem works out.
Details make the story come alive!
My characters have a voice, and the story sounds the way I wanted.
There are almost no mistakes in capitalization, punctuation, or spelling.
The beginning could be more interesting.
I haven’t told how the characters deal with the problem.
I forgot to include some important events.
The story doesn’t sound finished.
Details need to show, not tell, about the characters, events, and setting.
My story doesn’t sound the way I wanted.
There are a few mistakes.
Back to the drawing board
The beginning is boring.
There is no clear problem.
The story is confusing. Important events are left out.
The ending just stops. How does the problem work out?
Where can I add details?
My story is written in a dull, flat voice.
There are a lot of mistakes.
Wouldn’t it be nice if life had a rubric…but then perhaps it would be boring!